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Cinema attentence
The given chart describes about the cinema attendance of different age group of people in Australia, ten years between 1990 to2010. The age groups included 14 to24 yrs, 25 to 34 yrs, 35 to 49 yrs and above 50 yrs. The group above 50 yrs and 35 to 49yrs showed similar pattern of attendance, where as 25 to 35yrs shows a gradual increase and then decrease and 14 to 24 yrs remained roughly the same with marginal increase.
Turning to detail, the attendance of the age group of above 50yrs and 35 to 49yrs were only 40% and 60% in 1990 respectively, they continued the same level for next year. Then...
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Sentence: The given chart describes about the cinema attendance of different age group of people in Australia, ten years between 1990 to2010.
Error: to2010 Suggestion: to 2010
Sentence: The age groups included 14 to24 yrs, 25 to 34 yrs, 35 to 49 yrs and above 50 yrs.
Error: to24 Suggestion: to 24
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