Some people think that it is very important to get a university education Others feel we should encourage more young people to take up a trade such as plumbing painting or building to ensure a good balance of skills in our society Discuss both these views

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Some people think that it is very important to get a university education, Others feel we should encourage more young people to take up a trade such as plumbing, painting or building to ensure a good balance of skills in our society.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt in many developed countries getting a university education is a principle to be good at in society. Although, there are other skills such as plumbing, painting, building and the like to ensure a good balance of skills in community, They can not fulfill (satisfy) the whole improved society demand(s) adequately.

For many, a university education and quality degree are very important to get because they believe that their career preparation depends on them completely. Also colleges offer much more than career simplification. They offer the opportunity to have new experiences and to learn kinds of things. Most importantly they help individual to be good at in society on their own effectively. Also there are some vital occupation such as doctor, dentist, surgeon and so on, that they need to be educated at university. I think all mentioned reasons indicate the main way to have a developed society.

In the other hand, there are some skills like painting, tailor, baker, welder, etc. which are important in community context. Some of them are gained by practical efforts without any university degree. In fact, they do not place in high improved skills categories but they can be professional as a supplementary proficiency which society needs them for survival and livelihood. So they are important as society ordinary demands.

On the whole, some skills like carpenter are necessary in society but they can not symbolize some main characteristics of an improved community. It seems that getting university education is an inevitable affair recently.

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