Some people think that men and women have different qualities, which is why men are suitable for some types of jobs and women – for different types of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Gone are the days when women were thought to be a weaken member of society. At present, modrenization has given a huge swing to their lives , enabling them to rub shoulder with men in every walk of life. Therefore, both genders have been strong competitors of each other in almost every field. Here, I would like to discord with given statement firmly.
There are numerous points to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, earlier , women had to live inside the boundries of their homes but now they are dominating in politics, education, fashion, sports, business so on. For example, r...
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smetime I have doubt about ( , ) after so thus therefore ....could u tell me where to place comma when we write two types of therefore.
1. Therefore, 2. ,therefore
Use commas surrounding words
Use commas surrounding words such as therefore and however when they are used as interrupters.
Examples:
I would, therefore, like the decision.
I would be angry, however, to accept the decision.
But There are many cases for which a comma is unnecessary:
He is strong, and therefore a likely leader.
However strong he is, he is not a likely leader.
As for subordinate clauses, where the words function as subordinating conjunctions, the comma isn't always necessary either.
He is strong, therefore he must be a likely leader.
Suggestion:
if you can reasonably speak the sentence without a noticeable pause after the word however/therefore , don't bother with the comma. Otherwise, use it
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Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 333 350
No. of Characters: 1627 1500
No. of Different Words: 199 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.272 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.886 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.578 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 114 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.786 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.827 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.31 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.586 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.056 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5