The table below shows the consumer durables owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.
The table given below illustrates the long-term withstanding products that were belonged to the British people at the time period covering the years from 1972 to 1983.
The information on the table indicates the percentage of households with durables such as central heating, television, video, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator, washing machine, dishwasher and telephone. According to the given figures the amount of people having central heating, a refrigerator and a telephone increased most drastically, as the use of central heating, a refrigerator and a telephone has gone up by 27%, 21% and 35% r...
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Sentence: Additionally, although in 1972 there was no one using video and dishwasher in 1972, 18 of the British people were using a video and 5 of them were utilising a dishwasher in 1983.
Error: utilising Suggestion: utilizing
Sentence: Finally, percentage of households owning television, a vacuum cleaner and a washing machine has risen slowly as they rised by 5 to 14 .
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