There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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There are many different types of music in the world today.
Why do we need music?
Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Submitted by vanishpa on Tue, 04/16/2013 - 12:22

Music is life, emotion, feelings, memories, people and places, music is simply more than what we hear on the hear speakers. Music is even therapy. Nowadays we are able to listen to tons types of music each one of which is more or less appreciated, but all types can certainly boast a number of fans. Music plays a fundamental role in most people's lives.

As already mentioned, music is more than what we hear, is what we can imagine, remember, and even fell in the moment we hear it. Many places come to our minds when a specific song is playing, maybe an holiday, maybe an anniversary or even an ...

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Sentence: We all have at least 10 song each that arouse us memories and even we we don't know them by heart or their titles, only the melody can suggest us tons of feelings.
Suggestion: Refer to we and we

Sentence: Nevertheless, traditional music of a country is a pillar of the Country itself, it is a crucial cultural aspect of the population, the tradition are characterized by folk songs and ballads.
Description: The fragment , the tradition is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is

Sentence: We also need music to express ourselves, singers for instance put all their energies and interpretation in the songs played and often it is a way for them to extern their feelings and personalities.
Error: extern Suggestion: No alternate word

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