The two graphs below show the percentage of smokers and the cnsumption of alcohol in litres in selected countries,for the period 1960-2000.
Summaries the information by choosing and reporting the key features,and make any relevant comparisons.
The two line graphs describe the number of smokers and alcohol consumption in four different countries ; America, Japan, Holland, and Turkey , measured in litres from 1960 to 2000.
In general, it can be seen that the number of smoking people had been declined every decade year, from 1960 to 2000. In 1970 people smoking in Holland stood at the highest position, 60%. Then it declined significantly in 1980, at approximately 45%.While the two other countries, Japan and America declined from year to year. America became the lowest smoking people in 2000.
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