You have just returned from a work trip abroad with a colleague. Write a thank you letter to your colleague and say
- How you feel to be back
- how helpful he/she was
- invite him/her to visit you at home.
Dear Sarah,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for begin with you in trip to Italy.
Before this trip, we have not this opportunity to know well each other, but this trip help us to become good friend and I am very happy to find a such as good friend like you. Sara, I have felt sad since I came back, because this trip had a lot of advantages for me. First of all, I found you as good friend; secondly gain information about new tech. Moreover, it was wonderful country with a lot of historical place. Besides, I cannot forget their yummy foods and cookies.
Dear, you were my big chance in this trip. If you not be there, I would be in trouble because my information about reading blue printed plan is zero. Technically, I am a blind gay to reading any map or plan. I would like to invite you for barbeque that will held in my yard next weekend. My husband and I will glad if you accept my invitation and spend your weekend with us. Please, ring me soon.
With love,
Mari.
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Sentence: I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for begin with you in trip to Italy.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and begin
Sentence: Before this trip, we have not this opportunity to know well each other, but this trip help us to become good friend and I am very happy to find a such as good friend like you.
Description: The fragment trip help us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace help with verb, past tense
Sentence: I would like to invite you for barbeque that will held in my yard next weekend.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to will and held
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 184 200
No. of Characters: 745 1000
No. of Different Words: 114 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.683 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.049 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.212 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 38 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 27 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 12 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.663 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.393 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.536 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.202 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4