You were hurt in a minor accident at the supermarket and you wish to complain to the manager. In your letter
- say who you are
- give details about the incident
- suggest how supermarkets could prevent such accidents.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am a resident of XYZ block which is situated near your supermarket ( in ABC block). i am a regular customer of your supermarket and generally do the majority of my grocery shopping there.
Though I am satisfied with the service provided by your supermarket, I would like to bring to your notice a recent accident that took place while I was shopping there which caused me some minor injuries.
On 4th August, I visited the supermarket around noon. on entering, my attention was drawn towards an elaborate display of soup cans which were artistically arranged in the shape of...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 244 200
No. of Characters: 1051 1000
No. of Different Words: 144 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.952 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.307 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.376 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 67 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.948 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.222 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.439 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.658 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.148 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4