407 do you like the transport system in your country?

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the second reason is too short.

Dear Sir,
I try to be more emotional in order to add some nuances to my speech.
Is it a good idea?

Secondly, I listen to the record several time and the second reason is rather too big.
May you clarify what is wrong with this record?

Thank you.

from 17' to 24' is for secondly which is too short.

while from 25', 'and also...', the content is relatively different to 'secondly'. we can consider it 'thirdly'.

Only talk one thing in one reason. and focus on it. Don't make again sub topic.