Given is the pie chart illustrating the percentage of population in three aged groups in 2000 and the projection in 2050 in Italy and Yemen.
Overall, in Italy, the statistics from both charts have high numbers in the elderly population (aged over 60 years), while in Yemen, the youngest population ranged between 0 to 14 years old is always far more than the same group in Italy.
In 2000, only 3.6% of Yemen pie chart was contributed to the elderly group, whereas up to 24.1% was responsible for the proportion of aging population in Yemen. In the youngest group, there is a significantly small proportion in Italy as it had only 14.3%, which was lower than that in Yemen by 35%. However, 61.6% of total population in Italy was taken by the adult group(15-59 years), whereas the Yemen figure divided to this aged group only 46.3%.
In 2050,it is expected that Italian elderly population rise to 42.3%, which is almost ten times higher than that in Yemen. Moreover, the population of children in Yemen will be higher than it was because it will rocket to 37%, which is around three times higher than that figure in Italy. There is a lesser significance in the numbers of adult figures as it will be an approximately 10 percent difference between two nations, but the difference was by 20% before.
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whereas the Yemen figure divided to this aged group only 46.3%.
whereas the figure in Yemen divided to this aged group is only 46.3%.
Italian elderly population rise to 42.3%,
Italian elderly population will rise to 42.3%,
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24.1% was responsible for the proportion of aging population in Yemen
24.1% was responsible for the proportion of aging population in Italy.