The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first graph shows that there is a gradual decrease in study for career reasons with age. Nearly 80% of students under 26 years, study for their career. This percentage gradually declines by 10-20% every decade. Only 40% of 40-49yr olds and 18% of over 49yr olds studing for career reasons in late adulthood.
Conversely, the first graph also shows that study stemming from interest increases with age. There are only 10% of under 26yr olds studing out of interest. The percentage increases slowly till the beginning of the fourth decade, and increases dramatically in late adulthood. Nearly same number of 40-49yr olds study for career and interest. However 70% of over 49yr olds study for interest in comparison to 18% studing for career reasons in that age group.
The second graph shows that employer support is maximum (approximately 60%) for the under 26yr students. It drops rapidly to 32% up to the third decade of life, and then increses in late adulthood up to about 44%. It is unclear whether employer support is only for career-focused study, but the highest level is for those students who mainly study for career purposes.
that employer support is maximum (approximately 60%) for the under 26yr students
that employer has maximum support (approximately 60%) for the students under 26yr
Sentence: Only 40 of 40-49yr olds and 18 of over 49yr olds studing for career reasons in late adulthood.
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Sentence: There are only 10 of under 26yr olds studing out of interest.
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Sentence: However 70 of over 49yr olds study for interest in comparison to 18 studing for career reasons in that age group.
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Sentence: It drops rapidly to 32 up to the third decade of life, and then increses in late adulthood up to about 44.
Error: increses Suggestion: increases
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