The diagram below gives the information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the recipe of fish pie and how it is produced in a continuous chain.
First of all, a fish pie is a combination sauce, some pieces of fish, several of potato with some peas added. All of this mixture will be comprised in a container, which can be microwaved at home.
In the second place, the general overview of the production is that the process follows several artificial steps. In the first stage, potatoes are shipped to the factory up to one month before the manufacture. After all potatoes are cleaned, their skin will be peeled and removed to the waste disposal....
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