the graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in great britain between 1950 and 2005
The graph illustrates , how many people traveled by railway trips in great britin over a period in question.
Overall , what stand out from the graph is that the lowest rate of passenger just over 0% was for light rail and metro system while the highest percentage of passenger , utilezed national rail network look at the detail , as regards national rail network passenger rate was 1000 million in 1950 then in 1955 it had a sharp rise . after that the trend had gradualy decreased until 1980 . At this point the figure had an upward trend .
Considering london underground it began at just under 750 million and remained stable until 1975 then it was fluctuated but in 1982 the london undergraund figure had a sharp rise to 800 million in 1985 and it fluctuated at the end of the aformention period . The trend of national railwork and london under ground was similar. Finally the number of people who traveled by light rail and metro was negligible over a period in question.
Sentence: Overall , what stand out from the graph is that the lowest rate of passenger just over 0 was for light rail and metro system while the highest percentage of passenger , utilezed national rail network look at the detail , as regards national rail network passenger rate was 1000 million in 1950 then in 1955 it had a sharp rise . after that the trend had gradualy decreased until 1980 .
Error: gradualy Suggestion: gradual
Sentence: Considering london underground it began at just under 750 million and remained stable until 1975 then it was fluctuated but in 1982 the london undergraund figure had a sharp rise to 800 million in 1985 and it fluctuated at the end of the aformention period .
Error: undergraund Suggestion: underground
Error: aformention Suggestion: ?
Sentence: The trend of national railwork and london under ground was similar.
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