The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006 (REWRITE). Dedicated to Yora

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The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006 (REWRITE). Dedicated to Yora

The chart provides information regarding a comparison in percentage of overseas graduate students from universities based on several regions in Canada from 2001 to 2006.

According to the graph, in 2001 there were just about 3-to-7 percent graduate pupils from abroad per each region in Canada. However, the following years, the percentage of the overseas students were about 3-8 percent higher than those in 2001.

A more detailed look at the graph shows that both in 2001 and 2006, New Brunswick broke a record as a province in Canada with the highest overseas graduate students: nearly 7-to-13...

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