The graph shows the world population by region from year 1900 to 2000.

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The graph shows the world population by region from year 1900 to 2000.

Submitted by carmela6 on Sun, 05/25/2014 - 19:07

The pie graph represents the differences in the population of the world by region between the year 1900 and 2000.

In the year 1900, Asia region composed almost 60% of the entire population of the world whereas Europe's population was only 25%. The remaining 15% of the world population was distributed between North America with 5%. Latin America with 3% and 4.5% in Africa. The remaining was spread across the regions.

In the year 2000, the population of Asia decreased by 6% with the percentage went down from 60 to 54. Similarly, Europe declined from 25% to 14%. To the contrary, the other regions consistently increased at almost 9%. Latin America reached 10% furthermore, Middle East and North Africa both accelerated population growth by 6%. In addition there was a slight increased from 2.5% to 3% in other regions, whilst North America remained constant with 5%.

Overall, Asia had the highest percentage increase in world's population over the last century.

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