the graphs below show the post-school qualifications held by Australians in the age groups 25 to 34 and 55 to 69write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

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the graphs below show the post-school qualifications held by Australians in the age groups 25 to 34 and 55 to 69

write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

The pie chart illustrates about the undergraduate qualification of Australia student for two age groups, 25-34 year-olds and 55-69 year-olds. The number of first age group, 25-34 year-olds, is around three times compared to the second group, 347,500 and 104,800 respectively. This amount was presented in percentage of the total amount of each field of degree.

It can clearly be seen a slight different of number in social sciences program from those groups that shared with other program, 19.48% for the first group and 20.42% for the rest of the group which are the highest portion. The discrepancy between groups in majoring administration is around 5 %, the figures showed it was runner up position for the first group, 19.08%, whereas third position in the second group. Engineering become after social sciences shared the more amounts in the second group, 19.27% which near double for the first group, 9.35%. Veterinary-agriculture, education and the other major were shared the similar count for each age batch. And then, the counts of science-math-computer and law field of study of the first age batch were close two times compared to the second batch. Meanwhile majoring medicine has the same discrepancy with field of study administration both of group.

To sum up, the number of student who already hold bachelor degree from university In Australia for the young group is higher than the mature batch, and social sciences is the largest part.

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