The two pie charts illustrate the revenue gained by online retailers for four diverse products and services in New Zealand for the year 2003 and 2013. The sectors included were travel, film or music, books and clothes.
In 2003, the sales in travel sector was accounted for 36%. This sector showed a slight drop of revenue in 2013 with a percentage of 29%. On the other hand, the film or music sector constituted 21% of online sales in 2003. This sector experienced a sharp rise in 2013 in which its sales was 33% and it was the sector which accounted the largest portion of sales compared to the other three sectors. As for the book sector, the sales in 2003 was approximately 20%. After 10 years, its sales arouse slightly to 22%. Last but not least, the sales gained by online clothes retailers was constituted 24% which was the second largest sales made in 2003. It is surprising to note that this sector experienced a slight drop in 2013. The percentage of this sector was 16% and it covered the smallest portion of sales in 2013.
In summary, there were two sectors having a drop in sales and two sectors showed an increase in sales by comparing the two pie charts. The film or music and books sectors showed a rise in sales whereas the travel and clothes sectors faced a decline in sales.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'second', 'whereas', 'as for', 'in summary', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292775665399 0.268076937826 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.117870722433 0.116061578633 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0608365019011 0.0759168565197 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0114068441065 0.0366838410393 31% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0190114068441 0.0131127313244 145% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133079847909 0.155750635184 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0304182509506 0.0379272487307 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.30411244967 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0114068441065 0.0210936926555 54% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.117870722433 0.0948980150116 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0114068441065 0.00967000014798 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1306.0 1161.00487805 112% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.9 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5811965812 5.90752243213 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73763899035 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.307692307692 0.337110787985 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.192307692308 0.247514529752 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.102564102564 0.171178102325 60% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0598290598291 0.112407865282 53% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30411244967 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448717948718 0.546246751206 82% => OK
Word variations: 39.8028632071 49.3433353143 81% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 8.93414634146 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0094962315 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5523543207 42.9750493124 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 135.714022679 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.0094962315 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.689975730869 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 37.2307692308 47.7609492067 78% => OK
Elegance: 3.07692307692 2.94281807926 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.514381175556 0.418131533498 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142444712571 0.181151798455 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0939977512025 0.0850326197045 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.609862662711 0.706616315825 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.194901982318 0.157042692854 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.25294214687 0.228904883108 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13312592134 0.108899403657 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.370278798389 0.367819155151 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0371073858582 0.0812612215331 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.436167647696 0.316326947829 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583683897357 0.0921553760075 63% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.08536585366 196% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 7.1512195122 168% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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