The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The table reveals evidence of the underground railway systems in six major cities in the field of opening date, total length of route, and annual ridership.
In general, all mentioned features of six railroad systems varied extensively. While Kyoto’s system accounted for the shortest length and the lowest passenger statistics per year, the oldest system in London showed the longest route.
In 1863, London’s underground system coming first construction reached a total of 394 kms in length. By comparison with the latest system in Los Angeles being inaugurated in 2001 (lengthening 28 kms of route) that carried out 50 passengers per annum, such system carried almost sixteenfold increase in a full load of people.
Fast forward to the subterranean railway at the turn of the 20th century saw the establishment of the system located in Tokyo, built in 1927, served the largest number of passenger at 1927 million, followed by Paris as the second highest number. Washington Dc’s subway with 126 kms in line recorded 144 million travellers. Simultaneously, the data showed 11 kms and 45 million for the system length and ridership of Kyoto’s system.
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London’s underground system coming first construction reached a total of 394 kms in length.
London’s underground system coming as the first construction reached a total of 394 kms in length.
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