The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This chart shows the underground railways systems in six cities around world. I will analyze these datas with countries in following paragraphs.

There are some informations in this chart. The first line is city, Second line is date opened, Third is Length of route, last is passenger per year. We can know the first underground railways systems in the world is London in United Kingdom, opened in 1863. The second is Paris in France, opened in 1900. The longest route is also London, after all, it is first early underground railway. Long time make them build more railways.

The most passenger is Tokyo in Japan. There is important reason is hugely population in Tokyo. The second is Paris because the population less than Tokyo.

The less length of route make the passenger per year also less than other area.

There are an explain in Los Angeles. Most of people in United States use car and rarely to use underground. So There are less passenger per year. Most of passengers are tourists, not American.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...also less than other area. There are an explain in Los Angeles. Most of people in Unite...
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Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
... There are an explain in Los Angeles. Most of people in United States use car and rarely to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 127, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'passengers'?
Suggestion: passengers
...y to use underground. So There are less passenger per year. Most of passengers are touris...
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Line 9, column 147, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the passengers') or simply say ''Most passengers''.
Suggestion: Most of the passengers; Most passengers
.... So There are less passenger per year. Most of passengers are tourists, not American.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, third, after all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86705202312 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42806218691 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.865691412 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.625 112.824112599 47% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8125 22.9334400587 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.5625 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113598262262 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034944586102 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497490730355 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562564776704 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049251713464 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.78 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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