The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The maps illustrate the changes that have occurred in an outlying island where there have been developed some facilities for tourism. There are two pictures which show the island, before and after the development of several tourist facilities.

It is noticeable that the island has changed considerably with six new features. A striking point is that the main developments are that the island is accessible and visitors have an accommodation to stay.

To begin, there are some coconut trees in the west and east of the island, before some developments. After the construction, 15 small hunts can be seen in the two different locations following green areas. The other physical structures that have been built are restaurant and reception in the middle of the island.

Looking at the maps in more detailed, the new facility is a pier in which the boats can dock. There are also vehicle tracks which link the pier with the reception and restaurant. Running around the hunts is footpaths which connect between the hunts and a beach, and a swimming area is designed in the western of the island.

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