Write a letter to a local newspaper and describe a restaurant where you and your family have had a delicious meal recently. Please say
- What restaurant and where is it?
- What food do they serve?
- Would you recommend it to others? Why?
Dear Sir or Madam,
The purpose of me writing in to The Star newspaper is to introduce a restaurant nearby my neighbourhood where my family enjoyed a delicious meal last weekend.
The restaurant is located in Fremantle, Western Australia named The Sayer Sisters owned by an elderly couple. It is uniquely located near the beach which is highly suitable for family and couples. The restaurant is decorated with vintage furnitures from the 80s which bring back the feeling of retro.
In addition, they specialised in Western style breakfast and lunch in both sweet and savoury dishes. They are opened between 8am to 2pm. Their last ordering time is at 12.30pm to ensure that you have sufficient time to enjoy your meals.
I would highly recommend this restaurant to others due to their food choices, location and services. As mentioned, their menu consist of both sweet and savoury choices which can suit everyone taste bud. Their staff are also very professional and they are able to answer your enquiries on the type of food they serve. One of my personal favourite is the seaview from the restaurant itself. You can enjoy your meal while listening to the waves which is an ultimate joy of life.
I hope your readers would appreciate this feedback and can find time to visit this humble restaurant in Fremantle.
Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Nick
Sentence: As mentioned, their menu consist of both sweet and savoury choices which can suit everyone taste bud.
Description: The fragment menu consist of is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace consist with verb, past participle
One of my personal favourite is the seaview
One of my personal favorites is the sea view
while listening to the waves which is an ultimate joy of life.
while listening to the waves, which is an ultimate joy of life.
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