Write to your teacher and ask to give you a reference for a new job. Please say
Why do you need the reference letter?
- Describe the position that you are applying for.
- Why are you the right person for this position?
Dear Eric
I am contacting you in regard to write a recommendation letter for me. I am John Smith,one of the top ranked student on your subject-Web Service Engineering. I saw a job vacancy on university career development center's page and I want to apply for it. But it requires a strong recommendation letter with other supporting certificates.
The position 'Web Engineer' is very fascinating and exciting at Agile IT Solutions Pty Ltd. When I read through position description it is full time job with amazing remuneration. Position holder has to design secure and efficient web application for reputed business house. Furthermore, duties includes developing source codes, developing installable wizard and successful deployment of application at its fullest performance and quality.
As you know I am equipped with all understandings of web engineering and being great academic performer I think, I am the right candidate for this position. I hold all the criteria listed on the position description. On top of that, I have already an experience of web application development. Also a great communication skill and 'can do' attitude has proved me to apply for this job with great zeal and gusto.
Therefore, I humbly request you to write a recommendation letter for me. I appreciate your time consideration for writing this letter from your busy schedule.
I am looking forward hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours
John Smith
I am contacting you in regard to write a recommendation letter for me
I am contacting you in regard to writing a recommendation letter for me
one of the top ranked student
one of the top ranked students
When I read through position description
When I read through the position descriptions
has to design secure and efficient web application for reputed business house.
has to design secure and efficient web applications for reputed business houses.
Furthermore, duties includes developing source codes
Furthermore, duties include developing source codes
I have already an experience of web application development.
I have experiences on web application development already .
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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