You are due to start a new job next week but you will not able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter 1) explain your situation 2) describe your problems 3) tell him/ her when you think you can start.

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You are due to start a new job next week but you will not able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter 1) explain your situation 2) describe your problems 3) tell him/ her when you think you can start.

Dear Sir,

I regret to inform you that it is not possible for me to join your company for the first week of April month as I had told you at the interview. I need extra one week to join the Smith Company because suddenly I had been attacked by severe fever.

In the interview, I told you that I require 15 days to finish my current office works. Unfortunately, I was in hospital for seven days due to the fact that a severe fever attacks me. Therefore, I could not complete my works, so I need extra seven days to finish my current job works. If you want to see the prescription from my doctor, I will show you.

However, I am eagerly waiting for joining to your company. I can join in your company in the second week of April month. If I need to talk anyone for this matter please let me know, I will talk to him. Sorry for any inconvenience that arises for me.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Jahangir

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 181 200
No. of Characters: 733 1000
No. of Different Words: 97 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.668 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.05 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.313 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 42 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 29 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 13 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.923 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.457 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.401 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.719 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.198 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4