You are studying overseas. You need to return to your country before the end of the semester for a family event. Write a letter to your supervisor.
In your letter:
• Request time off
• Explain why you need to leave early
• Reassure him / her that your studies will not suffer
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
Yesterday, I received a mail from my father. My parents fixed the marriage ceremony date of their daughter on next 25th September. For this occasion, a 20 days vacation from on 15th September to 5th October, it is required for me to back to my country. Whether you consider me to allow a time off, I would be grateful to you.
A tight emotional bonding is prevailed between me and my sister. My adorable sister gave her concern on wedding ceremony with a condition,only if her brother who is studying abroad has to be present on the coupling day. My father also needs me in the program because the bride-groom welcome ceremony is a colossal party in our society. My parents will never manage all aspects without absence of me.
Anyway, current semester is now at the middle position. A study gap in this stage, it will be a perilous decision for my academic season. But I have not any alternative to avoid. Beginning of the next semester, I would carry the backlog subjects. The semester with extra courses may be it will be a burden for me I know. However, a confidence, I have, if my supervisor suggests and assists me on pivotal issues, this will be a plausible challenge.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely yours,
Arif
without absence of me.
without the absence of me.
The semester with extra courses may be it will be a burden for me I know.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
A study gap in this stage, it will be a perilous decision
A study gap in this stage will be a perilous decision
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 10
No. of Words: 225 200
No. of Characters: 995 1000
No. of Different Words: 139 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.873 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.422 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.562 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.328 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.293 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.622 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.096 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4