Dear Mr. Thomas,
I am writing to seek your permission to avail leave for a couple of weeks to attend my sister's wedding in my home country.
The main reason that I apply for an extended leave ahead of this semester is that this one is going to be the first marriage in our family, and my parents alone will not be able to pull of all the arrangements. Moreover, my father has severe medical problems which prevent him from doing excessive traveling to get things done. Hence, this is the right time for me reciprocate my feeling of love and affection for them by sharing this lighter but crucial burden.
With regards to the period of leave, I will be requiring leave from 24th of April to 10h of May that counts to 10 days of holidays excluding Saturdays and Sundays. I know this will definitely impact my studies. However, I will ensure that I spend time in the late nights and early mornings not only to revise the portions but also familiarise myself with the rest of the topics. Furthermore, on return, I assure you that I will study extra hours in the weekends to take notes of the skipped portions from my classmates to cover up the syllabus.
I hope my request will be accepted and I will be granted permission. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Akilan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 378, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...arise myself with the rest of the topics . Furthermore, on return I assure you th...
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Line 7, column 403, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of the topics . Furthermore, on return I assure you that I will study extra hou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, look, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 5.60731707317 678% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58974358974 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48739329341 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623931623932 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8347586868 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6363636364 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138395322113 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600100895435 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053959552987 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731561177862 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375721876991 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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