Generally, the government spends a huge amount on preserving the ancient articfrats and promoting traditional art forms of the country. Few argue that these expenditures are not useful for the people of the country, and this can be better invested in something that has more economic value. In my opinion, costs that incurred for the promotion of art is more important for any country to carry its cultural and traditional value to the young and future generations.
There are people those who suggest the government shall spend a large amount of money on schemes that contribute to the welfare of the people. For example, it can invest in industries and businesses those are capable of generating more employment opportunities. Furthermore, more focus shall be given to the development of infrastructural projects such as constructions of bridges, dams and better living atmosphere for the citizens. Some even suggest that educational institutions and hospitals with high-end equipment must be given top most priority while allocating funds, as they are key for better future of the country and its people.
On the other hand, preservation of arts has its own advantages. Firstly, cultural centres such as museums, temples, palaces etc., give chance to the new generation to know their country's ancient history and its cultural and heritage values. Secondly, performing or viewing artforms such as paintings, dances, sculptures, gives immense pleasure and peace of mind to the person who does it. In addition to this, it also creates a person's creative skills. Finally, a country that invests more money in preserving their cultural identities attracts a lot of tourists not only domestically, but also from foreign countries which help it to generate revenues through tourism.
Although it could be argued that cost incurred on the creative activities can be invested instead on infrastructural and social welfare schemes, the benefits that the mankind derives from them can never be denied. What will happen if we all are surrounded only by things of economic value, with no avenues for entertainment or relaxation? Certainly, people under such circumstance would feel unhappy and demotivated. For these reasons, I believe that the sum used for promotion of arts are necessary for the welfare of the people.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30434782609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93999135192 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578804347826 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6205296458 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165847115088 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525421912012 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377091914257 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973728175657 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208443650021 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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