Your company sent you on a training in another country , in the end of the training you get a certificate , you’ve lost it .Write letter to the responsible tell him/her:- How you lost your certificate.- Why you need the certificate now.- What you need him

Essay topics: Your company sent you on a training in another country , in the end of the training you get a certificate , you’ve lost it .
Write letter to the responsible tell him/her:
- How you lost your certificate.
- Why you need the certificate now.
- What you need him to do for you.

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Dear John Smith,

Thank you for sharing in-depth information on latest technology innovations. I have gained tremendous amount of knowledge on cutting-edge technologies with your valuable coaching. I am writing to inform you about the lost certificate which you have given to me on the last day of our course period.

I forgot my back-bag at reception area of the hotel where i stayed during my training period. I have placed a request with Lost and Found department of the guesthouse and i was told that they did not find any such item. Unfortunately, that bag contains the memorandum i have received up on completion of "Latest trends of computer" course at your training center.

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Sentence: I would be grateful if you could provide me an another copy of the certificate.
Description: An article is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, singular
Suggestion: Refer to an and another

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 213 200
No. of Characters: 1043 1000
No. of Different Words: 136 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.82 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.897 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.892 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 81 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 57 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.214 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.35 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.214 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.733 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.135 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4

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