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The given chart represent the percentage of water utilization in various aspects in the major continents of the worrld. Here we are going to breakdown the chatrs according to their uses. From the North Amirica chart we can see that the maximum water are being used for the industrial purposes which is around the half of the total amount and have almost 180 degree in the pai chart while the agricultral percentages boosts over the domestic uses which is around 13 percent. From the south Amirica pai chart we can see that the water uses for the agricultures dominent over the domestic and industries since we know that the south amirica is one of the hotsports of the world in the production of the food crops. The industrial uses are here is about 19 percent and domestic is around 10 percent of the total uses. In Europe, most of the countries are industrially well developed so it is not surprissing to us that the industrail use dominent over the agriculture and domestic and ferm. Since here the population is large the agricultural ase is almost double of the domestic one. In Africa, since most of the countries are poor and education here are not yet to developed so most of the people depends upon the agriculture and the uses of the water are here almost 84 percent while industrial conditions is such poor that they are occupy only 7 percent. In cenral Asia, most of the country are well depend on their ferm so it is not surprising here the argricultural use dominate over other. Even it is the area where the agricultural uses of water is the highest than any oher region of the world which is almost 88 percent. Industry and domestic uses are nearly equal here. FInally, in the South east Asia, most of the water are being used for argeiculture as well a like the other part of the Asia. It is almost 81 percent water uses in ferm where the industry and domenstic water uses are 12 and 7 percent respectively. So from the above pai chat we can see that the central Asia is the reagion whrer the agricultural requirements for wather is the most where in Europe the Industrial need for water dominate compare to the other reagion. For the case of domestic use, the Europe is also on the top water user among the other continent of the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the agriculture and domestic and ferm. Since here the population is large the agricu...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'occupied'.
Suggestion: occupied
...l conditions is such poor that they are occupy only 7 percent. In cenral Asia, most of...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...nral Asia, most of the country are well depend on their ferm so it is not surprising h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 7.0 443% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 965.302439024 191% => OK
No of words: 407.0 196.424390244 207% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54054054054 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 3.73543355544 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51046022048 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 106.607317073 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.402948402948 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 283.868780488 214% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0891495803 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.2 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1333333333 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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