The advantages and disadvantages of using Facebook as a means of online instruction

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The advantages and disadvantages of using Facebook as a means of online instruction

Due to Coronavirus disease, all of the schools in Viet Nam forces to close, and study online is the best solution for students. Facebook is one of the tools we use to learning, and after a short time, we recognize that it has negative and positive things.

About positive things, first, Facebook is a freely available app. Most of the teenager have to use it today, by learning on this app, students can relax and study at the same time. We can see the post and the exercise of our teacher faster and clearer than looking at the blackboard through our glasses. Moreover, we can interact with friends and teachers by chatting in groups and comments below the post. Then we can give the answers or projects fastly. Besides, students and teachers can elective places to study instead of going to the classroom. We do not need to pay parking fees as normal and do not waste time to move during lessons.

And about the negative things, we saw that not all students have the internet at home so they must buy the internet (4G). On Facebook, we can not exchange directly to each other as "Zoom" or "Google meet", so we just do exercises and post in Facebook groups. This is the most disadvantageous thing by using Facebook to learning, without contact directly we require to control ourselves to complete the exercise before the deadline.

there are some positive and negative things about using Facebook for learning online. Recently, because of COVID-19, we must stay home already, so Facebook becomes a useful tool for students although some limitations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
Due to Coronavirus disease, all of the schools in Viet Nam forces to close, an...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'closing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: closing
..., all of the schools in Viet Nam forces to close, and study online is the best solution ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 384, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'controlling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: controlling
...ng, without contact directly we require to control ourselves to complete the exercise befo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...e the exercise before the deadline. there are some positive and negative things a...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, look, moreover, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 269.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88847583643 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6670472543 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 283.868780488 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0977461222 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142471834326 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530902658974 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538746819063 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103039961728 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404949094345 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
Due to Coronavirus disease, all of the schools in Viet Nam forces to close, an...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'closing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: closing
..., all of the schools in Viet Nam forces to close, and study online is the best solution ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 384, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'controlling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: controlling
...ng, without contact directly we require to control ourselves to complete the exercise befo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...e the exercise before the deadline. there are some positive and negative things a...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, look, moreover, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 269.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88847583643 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6670472543 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 283.868780488 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0977461222 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142471834326 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530902658974 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538746819063 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103039961728 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404949094345 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.