Air pollutants in UK

Essay topics:

Air pollutants in UK

The line graph illustrates various reasons of air pollutants in the UK during the period 1990 to 2005.
Overall, after 15 years , UK saw downward trends of total air pollutants , industry and household but a rose in the transport.The most common source of air pollution belonged to the industry.
Looking at the total air pollutant and industry , in 1990 , total air started at 7 million tonnes and the figure for industry was 5.5 million which was nearly most of the total air.After 15 years , both of them decreased steadily by around 2.5 million tonnes for industry and 3 million for total air pollution. In addition, there was also an insignificant reduction in the figure for domestic from 0.8 to 0.2 million tonnes.
By contrast , UK experienced a minimal rise in the proportion of transportation. It began at the same number as household . After having a slight drop from 1996 to 1999 by around 0.4 billion, it increased to 1 billion tonnes over a 15-year period.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87272727273 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82861833158 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9945244563 43.030603864 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362669564539 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161363594245 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169715639142 0.0843802449381 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25878862074 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153163228435 0.0819641961636 187% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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