Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development.
There exist endless debates how youngster spend a large amount of time to playing video game while they are spend a little amount of time on sport. Some people claim that playing video game help their brain more develop. I am in favour of the view that positive for the youth
First and foremost it is believe that playing video game make their kid more lazy. This is because in the era of modernization youngster has tendency to play video game than take part in sport. As a result not only video game is a kind of game to reduce stress after workout but also it is likely a sport game events. In addition many company produce that events such as garena. It is easy to see that game is the most popular trend in the globe. For instance young inhabitants argue that playing sport is behind the time and not suitable for the trend in the world. Even if they play sport, they would lazy and do not have enough skill in it cause they spend a great amount of time to play
On the other hand, another factor to consider is take part in games will make their brains are no longer active than before. In addition youngster can not control their behavior. A great example for this would be a large number of children who crazy about that stuff, they can fight and punches to each other about video games content. furthermore some video games are include adults content on it so if the government public the law that require legal age in games, i believe that figure will be decline.
To conclude, i strongly argue that government need to figure out for the vital role of games. In addition spending to much time in game make harmful for the youth so it is clearly to see that it can be negative trend for the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: spent
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Suggestion: believed
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'event'?
Suggestion: event
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Suggestion: addition,
...so it is likely a sport game events. In addition many company produce that events such a...
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Suggestion: addition,
...ns are no longer active than before. In addition youngster can not control their behavio...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a crazy'.
Suggestion: who is a crazy
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Suggestion: furthermore,
...o each other about video games content. furthermore some video games are include adults con...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ure out for the vital role of games. In addition spending to much time in game make harm...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...tal role of games. In addition spending to much time in game make harmful for the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36363636364 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08598019442 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492163009404 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5038390135 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241156544889 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832533934379 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682953491938 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158463655596 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801063851467 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.