Bar chart: amount spent on consumer goods
The bar chart gives information about how much citizens in four European countries (namely Germany, Italy, France and Britain) spent on different items.
Overall, British people spent the most considerable amount of money on all six goods. The highest figure in the six items was photographic film.
The most popular item that British consumers spent on was photographic film with over 170,000 pounds. In contrast, people paid the least for all products with roughly the same figures (just under 150,000 pounds) for each of the six products.
The figure for spending on toys was very similar in both Italy and France, at nearly 160,000 pounds. However, while French consumers paid out more for CDs and photographic film, Italian consumers spent more on personal stereos, tennis racquets and perfumes. The amount spent by French consumers on tennis racquets, around 145,000 pounds, is the lowest figure shown in the chart.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27702702703 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40786201612 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641891891892 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5512975169 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255848849084 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109530234139 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970810216849 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142078088397 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579927202697 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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