Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that immigration has become trendy with an increasing number of immigrants each year. It also comes with an issue of whether or not immigrants should change their behavior to adapt to their new country. This essay agrees with this statement because some old customs or behaviors are not acceptable in their adopted country, and it is for the good sake of uniting.
Firstly, it is vitally important for newcomers to observe the laws as their old customs might not appropriate to the new country’s law and for the aim of social order. By obeying the new laws, immigrants can avoid involving in any serious cases such as a police state. One particular good instance of this is traffic regulations – imagine what a mess it would cause if people refuse to drive on the same side of the road. Another example that’s worth mentioning is the possession of firearms and gambling, it can be permitted in some countries but illegal in others.
Secondly and equally essential, respecting the social norm of host country and code of behavior is a good way to build a societal cohesion. Many immigrants coming to a country means that there are various customs brought to the new community. Thus, it makes the country color and vibrancy. The laws help people live in the same living mode; however, too much cultural diversity may weaken a society by alienating people from each other. For instance, learning the native language makes communication between newcomers and local dweller easier.
To conclude, it is necessary for immigrants to learn new local rules and behavior so that they will find it easy to be integrated into new country. Although those old rules are acceptable in their native country, they are strictly prohibited in the host country. Moreover, by obeying new regulations, they are making great contributions to their host country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ch year. It also comes with an issue of whether or not immigrants should change their behavior...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00319488818 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70749761498 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568690095847 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8468557667 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260185061179 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793871368586 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506534748283 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148549979029 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501971488949 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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