Over the past few decades, the scenario of people migrate to other foreign nation has become more prevalent. Some people suggest that the immigrant should live a way as same as local people. From my perspective, I consent with the prompt on account of several arguments, which would be elaborated in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, it is necessary that the newcomers should get accustomed to the tradition and conform to the regulation of the new country in which they live. It is due to the fact that this is a way which may be able to maintain the social order. To demonstrate, in some country with diverse colors like Paris, the wonderful impression of this city often be damaged by the migrants who disobey and neglect the norms and laws. Imagine that such magnificent metropolis inundated with rob, steal, deceptive tricks and so forth. As a result, it is vital for every immigrant to abide by the rules and adapt to the local social norms.
Last but not least, the maintenance of indigenous culture is essential for the government and all the citizens. It might be claimed by the supporters of diverse culture that creating an atmosphere of various color renders the city more vibrant and appealing. Nevertheless, in my opinion, diversifying the culture could undermine the local cultures as well. Take Kaohsiung city for example, it has transformed from a traditional town abound with distinctive features to an international metropolitan encompassed by commerce from around the world.
In conclusion, as argued above, there are pros and cons in international migrate. To ensure a satisfying public order and intact local culture, the newcomers should comply with the law and social norms.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08833922261 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84746023973 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590106007067 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0177774652 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.857142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129979171691 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453449979135 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051723976287 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08087307867 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507347309321 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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