The bar graph below compares the number of average working time in a week in eight professional groups, while the given pie chart illustrates the percentage of people in different vocation suffering stress-related ailment.
By and large, business men and movie producers tend to work longerly than other professions as can be seen in the bar graph. As for the pie chart, lecturers and movie producers are more likely to have hard time in managing stress problem.
Turning to the detail, the business men spend 70 hours working weekly, as opposed to the lecturers, who work under 30 hours per week. With regard to pie chart, one-fourth of lecturers suffer from stress-related illness, compared to the programmers who merely occupy 5%. Movie producers and doctors are the second and third most susceptible group to the pressure related illness. comprising nearly 20% and 15% respectively.
The most striking point is that the proportion of writers who afflicted by stress is on par with the figure of lawyers, making up 8%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Comprising
... group to the pressure related illness. comprising nearly 20% and 15% respectively. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, third, while, as for, by and large, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10059171598 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79141972637 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650887573964 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7983010056 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194810496529 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723444818581 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574979394022 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113399499173 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545975438604 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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