These days, it seems that more that people are immigrating to adopted country than ever before. Although the part of people believe that newcomer do not need to abandon the customs of their owner, other including me disagree with this opinion. The second view will be discussed in this essay.
One of the most vitally important goal of immigration is to accept the culture of the new countries. Frist of all, when newcomer arrive the new local who do not learn law and process of works so they must pay more money as well as time to obtain their aims. For instance, immigrants to the adopted country need to purchase or hire a comfortable home that the majority of them do not recognize about legal process so who should pay extra costs or also make contract with lawyer for solve their problems. Secondly, understand with the culture of destination country will increase their success.it is obvious that, newcomer must figure out people of adopted country what think, what want. Therefore, it will be help them for achievement.
Other essential reason will result in newcomers leaves their old ways is less chaos. Frist of all, respecting the social norm of host country and code of behaviors is a good way to build a social cohesion. Many immigrates coming to host country mean that there are severe of social custom brought to new community. Secondly, in the various countries have different laws in place to increase their national security. Thus, it is necessary for all immigrate to ensure that obey the law in the adopted countries two further instance of practices which are permitted in some countries but prohibited in others are the possession of firearms and gambling.
By way of conclusion, I believe that this issue likely to become even more important in the future. Adapting to local customs and culture of new country by newcomers and release their old ways could be benefit for society and also for themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'instance' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'instances'.
Suggestion: instances
...aw in the adopted countries two further instance of practices which are permitted in som...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89665653495 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51258048034 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550151975684 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4326146834 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33542528284 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106789415145 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696654813836 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211195485086 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343950550923 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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