Annual extinction of many languages with fewer speakers is accelerations. Although the percentages of people believe that having few languages will be beneficial to the whole world, other including me totally disagrees with this fact. The second view will be discussed in this essay.
A group of people dreams of a unified world with no culture and common language spoken by all. They advocate the need for fewer languages, such as English, to bring the nation together and the foster global trade and understanding. However, they forget that a language is not just an accumulation of spoken words, but the key to a culture. Once a language is lost, the knowledge, literature, and tradition expressed using it also get extinct.
A language evolves throughout the decades and embodies the culture way of life history and wisdom of the group of people. If cultural diversity does not persist, there would be no meaning in learning a new language and no trill to travel to different part of the globe. A language is like Oxygen for the culture of an area and conduct of human heritage. In addition, language is a gift provided to generations from the ancestors that need to be preserved and not killed.
By way of conclusion, it seems that among the various portion of society are different ideas about this issue, no one is denying, having international language for global trade and communication, but not with the cost of global diversity and heritage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97551020408 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81422577669 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563265306122 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7440672063 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.583333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265578330619 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10054179992 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554515745997 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16175429497 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800268910909 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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