Different individuals have their own opinion about the happiest phase in the human’s life. Although the proportion of society agree that college years are cheering time in the individual’s life, others including me say that people are gladder when they are fully grow-up. Both of these views will be discussed in this essay.
Certain people feel that adolescent life is joyful than the matured. First of all, youths do not share responsibility in their homes and simply benefits form everything that is made available by their parents. However, sometimes they share certain duties around houses or start a part-time job. It will at the minimum level of responsibilities and also will not be under the stress of the portion of their life. Secondly, they have abundant free time to choose their leisure activities and trace their true hobbies. They can spend most of the time performing the task and enjoy the most. Thereby they will always live a happy life.
There is the cluster of individuals who consider adulthood as the most blissful phase of life. First of all, people earn more independence by becoming an adult. They have a more chance to try something than the teenager, who can manage their own time and decide what they want to do with their life. They believe that a person can experience happy only when they are able to satisfy other’s need. Secondly, adult life offers more economic freedom that is mentioned as an important reason. They can earn much money from their job to meet their expenses. Furthermore, financial independence allows than to start their own families and have own children.
By way of conclusion, although having no responsibilities can help people to stay happy, but knowing that they are capable to satisfy their relative's requirement bring more happiness. It seems that senior people are happier than young people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08737864078 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7034995147 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569579288026 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3765119747 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7368421053 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21071351244 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729613761707 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484787256789 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151412745106 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658690614453 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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