some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Other think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Everybody has lots of memories associated with their adolescent years. Not only it revives your most nostalgic memories, but also turn out to be happiest moments of your life. However, some argue that adulthood brings greater joy along with responsibility and accountability. In my personal view, childhood days happiness is irreplaceable by forthcoming periods of life. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
The most prominent point in support of the childhood happiness is limitations of anxiety and stress levels, which are very minimal on the contrary with adulthood. Moreover, children spend their ample time playing and chatting with their friends., with whom they share true bond of friendship. Secondly, life of a young child is restricted to themselves because they have family support to take care of more important matters.in addition to it, teenagers are showered with love from their near and dear ones, which makes them feel special in this world.Lastly, kids enjoy living in fantasy world through fairly tales, which tend to fade away as they mature along with happiness.
On the other hand, adulthood comes with a lot of sacrifices and hardships a person eventually make to lead a prosperous lifestyle along with their family.On attainment of their aim or vision in life, it fill oneself with realisation of self-actualisation needs. Furthermore, parents tend to find happiness in their children, which in turn, on attaining success in their life makes them feel proud in the society. Finally, well-balanced approach in maintaining personal and professional life leads to happy moments in adulthood for greater period of time.
To sum up, it can be concluded that although person can attain joyful memories in young days and later period of life. Nevertheless, absence of ideal scenario in latter most pf the time exacerbate the problem of distress. Yet childhood is always engulfed with overwhelmingly happiest moments of the lifetime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'overwhelmingly the happiest'.
Suggestion: overwhelmingly the happiest
.... Yet childhood is always engulfed with overwhelmingly happiest moments of the lifetime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33653846154 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94134913999 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621794871795 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.5101423634 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120290693536 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475671289474 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330915153684 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828036899933 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047824547372 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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