Mankind goes through different phases of life on this earth. From early days of childhood to adolescence, from energetic years of youth to the time that is filled with wisdom of age, people go through different experiences. Hence, the controversy exists as to when the happiest years of one’s life are. Some believe it is the earlier ages that people feel the happiest, whereas others think a person experiences true happiness in adulthood. In this essay, both sides of this argument along with my own view on the subject are comprehensively discussed.
The first and perhaps the most prominent advantage of adolescent life which supporters believe leads to a high degree of happiness and comfort is having the parental support, both financial and emotional. No one can deny the happy memories of being loved by parents. Moreover, teenagers are scarcely responsible for financial needs of the household. On the contrary, they are supported by older family members, usually the parents, who are the breadwinners. Thus, they do not have to be worried about financial obligations, and therefore, they can experience happier times.
On the other hand, there is a cascade of reasons that can shift the happiest times of a person’s life to adulthood. Although the advantages of being supported during the earlier stages of life cannot be disregarded, I believe it comes with the price of independence. Adulthood life liberates people from the aforementioned constraint. An adult person does not need to abide by the rules that are enforced by the seniors of the household. Hence, they can experience the life according to their own pace. Furthermore, it is in adulthood that people have the freedom to shape their future according to their own preferences and interests. For example, adults decide for themselves when or whether they want to make a change in their careers.
In conclusion, while the joys of teenage days cannot be denied, due to mentioned reasons, I concur that it is in adulthood that one can feel happiness the most.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1223880597 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89457747315 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546268656716 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0231412825 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204377753057 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616570971661 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524764048074 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112122363113 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761606818139 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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