Nowadays more people are migrating to other countries than even before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt local customs and codes of behaviours.
there has been an increase in the quantity of people migrating overseas in recent years. it is stated that immigrants should forget about their traditions, habits related to their native country and ought to learn habits, social norm of new areas so as to be adopted to this society. To me, this view does not seem sensible to join. Two clear arguments against will be provided in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the majority of newcomers do not visit abroad on the way to live forever. Almost all of them have a tendency to return home after they can earn perceptible number of money. when we look from the case of Central Asian countries, a healthy proportion of citizens migrating Russian Federation return their native lands after 3-4 years. If they become dependable on social life of migrated country, they can not live in their society. As a consequence, there will be isolation from their own society after immigrants come back.
Second and even more significant aspect to consider is that there is a chance to keep their own customs and other ways of adopting new country. there are some sacred traditions that can not be forgettable. Therefore, most of the immigrants try to gather and live near to each other. A striking example for this is USA. there exist some streets that are specialized for certain nations such as Italians, Mexicans. this way helps the very people to be gather and solve problems jointly.
Conclusion has become evident, here. when we look from the angle of returning the home and other ways of integrating, it is clear that there is no necessity of adopting to new traditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, so, therefore, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88086642599 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57755665372 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581227436823 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9197367912 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5294117647 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241283765622 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629310844996 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641391238325 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132793212711 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253271687216 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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