The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations to reduce their consumption of fossil fuels e.g. gas and oil.
us" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">these days, the hectic lifestyle has increased the stress level among people. A few psychologists suggest that one of the ways to get rid of stress is to stay idle for some time. In my opinion, stress is preventing us from enjoying our happy moments and inviting acute diseases. I strongly agree with the argument that stealing some time from daily chores to give rest to your mind, helps in reducing the stress level.
us" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">To begin with, the brain, like any other human body part, needs time to repair the damaged tissues. The brain works in a manner similar to a machine. And if we overload it with numerous activities, then it will collapse at one stage. Therefore, we need to give it rest by taking some time-off. In a recent survey it was found that people who work more than 14 hours a day are 80% more likely to die in their 50s.
us" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">On the other hand, there are many benefits to doing nothing. By not engaging in any work, we can divert our mind towards good old memories. it releases good hormones in our body. these feel good hormones refresh our mind and provide extra energy. also we can use this time to converse with the family members. it contributes to developing strong bond among family members. For example, studies have shown that people who spend a lot of time with their family have considerably reduced risk of developing cardiac problems.
us" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">In conclusion, stress is like a termite. it not only kills the present joy but also ruins future plans. Hence, it is not healthy to constantly focus on our life goals. An occasional break from these priorities will help to alleviate stress and bring peace to mind and life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29392971246 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59776186181 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610223642173 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9011567951 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.85 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.65 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0190656148109 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00604342136808 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0152743372159 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0128603323541 0.151304729494 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00855768720546 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.