The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
the provided is a tale graph revealing how much energy was produced in 5 european countries in 2001. The data is given in percentage for four various electro energies together with inclusive of other fuels.
nuclear was the main source of producing electricity in belgium. Its giant 58% shar can elucidate this point. furthermore, Sweden took the second position with 47% in this fuel type. so as to create energy, germany prefered to use coal and light to demonstrate this, coal and lignite made up 50% in the proportion of this country together with dominant disparity than other countries.
italy had tendency to utilize from petroleum products on the way to generating energy. the figure of the very country was 27% whereas others almost didn't use it. Moreover, italy made use of hydrowind mostly(27%) while other countries' indication became marginal.
in the case of Sweden, utilizing other fuels was predominant among the countries aforastated . italy was lower by 1% with 12% when comparing to Germany in this category.
Overall, nuclear and coal/lignite made up the major part of generating electricity in all countries. notwithstanding, hydrowind was used the least for this purpose
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- Nowadays more people are migrating to other countries than even before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt local customs and codes of behaviours. 61
- International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. 67
- The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 11
- Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. 67
- The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations to reduce their consumption of fossil fuels e.g. gas and oil. 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, second, so, whereas, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24479166667 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82286906547 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3812813564 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4615384615 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00546694159394 0.215688989381 3% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0029653587594 0.103423049105 3% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0102723040679 0.0843802449381 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00242982174482 0.15604864568 2% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00485964348965 0.0819641961636 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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