-Many people choose to work or live abroad because of the higher standards of living they can find outside their home country. Do you think this brings more advantages or disadvantages to the people who follow this path?
Admittedly, deforestation with origins in people's activity is turning into a common issue in almost every country bearing forests inside. I think this is a burning issue in need of urgent ways out found. The following paragraphs will offer feasible measurement against it.
The first step to consider could be to cut the amount of clearance to vacate space for urban infrastructure. Most of the forests lying in proximity to our cities are being destroyed to offer expansion of the very cities. Thereby, maintaining vertical growth of city areas rather than horizontal one could be effective, here. this could be done by stimulating the blocks, for instance. To illustrate a succesful case for this, Brazilian example could be mentioned. To save the dying Amazon main forest authorities have imposed restrictions on any construction on the brink of the forests to avoid growth of cities deep into the forest.
Another method could be to stop cutting of more agriculture yields and to guarantee more fertile land for cultivation many woody areas tend to be sacrificed globally. new innovative agriculture methods requiring less land resources should be devised for this. On of such schemes called vertical farming is already in effect in countries like China. The authorities of many metropolitan cities such as Shanghai are supporting such farming method with multi-storey facilities financially. More development like this could simply lower the demand to cut down forests.
Conclusion has become clear, here. Although deforestation is a concerning issue , I believe, protection of forests from our largening cities together with new farming methods with smaller land requirements could tackle it effectively.
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| 2018-12-26 | Tashev Jamshid | 73 | view |
| 2017-04-16 | grahamoneil | 56 | view |
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- The figures below compare the number of internet users in several European nations as well the prevalence of online shopping in these countries. 61
- International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. 67
- The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations to reduce their consumption of fossil fuels e.g. gas and oil. 11
- -Many people choose to work or live abroad because of the higher standards of living they can find outside their home country. Do you think this brings more advantages or disadvantages to the people who follow this path? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4456928839 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96162430673 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.990721678 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0813577004348 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308243119704 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316098325048 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505814367975 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376359523767 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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