The bar chart below illustrates the use of tobacco products by secondary school students in the United States

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The bar chart below illustrates the use of tobacco products by secondary school students in the United States.

The bar chart shows the variety usage of tobacco products in secondary school in the United States. Overall, students study in high school use tobacco goods in any kinds more than middle school students 23 per cent.

It can be clearly seen that smoking cigarettes is the most popular tobacco products in high school at approximately 28%, while pipes is used by smallest amount of high school students 2% lower than another tobacco products such as Cigars, Smokeless, Kreteks and Bidis are 15%, 6%, 5% and 3% respectively.

However, students in middle school are not far difference from high sch...

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smoking cigarettes is the most popular tobacco products
cigarettes are the most popular tobacco products

students in middle school are not far difference from high school students
students in middle school are not far different to high school students

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