The bar chart displays how occupations were distributed by English citizens in both genders in the year of 2005. It can be clearly seen that men were mostly interested in management and technical aspect, meanwhile women tended to be keen on doing common office tasks.
In details, the most striking figure was the huge discrepancy in genders probability in skill-trades, with approximately 15% more of males than females. In contrast, women dominated in writing office task, especially in administrative and secretarial, which reached a peek at 22% respectively. Meanwhile, the amount of men participated in this aspect was only 5%.
On the other hand, professional, technical and elementary were the three considerably segments that have the same amount of employees by both genders due to the small difference in probability, in the range of 12% - 15%.
Operation occupations (Process, plant and machine operatives) and sales and customer service had the same gap, with men took over 15% lead to women. The complete opposite scenario happened to personal service aspect, while it was 14% for males and 3% for males, respectively.
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. 83
- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compari 84
- The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 89
- Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are reasons for these behaviors? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
... technical aspect, meanwhile women were tend to be keen on doing common office tasks...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be keen on doing common office tasks. In details, the most striking figures w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ticipated in this aspect was only 5%. On the other hand, professional, technic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39784946237 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1653417827 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9191982898 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0881963764607 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423516184943 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763715164328 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480119914195 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469235257206 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.