The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the electricity producing process by using geothermal power plant.

First, the cold water is pumped down deeply to 4.5 km height from the ground tank, before colliding the injection well border. Next, it is transferred into the hot fluid, by flowing through geothermal zone, which is mainly produced by the underground hot rocks. The hot water is soon condensed and naturally creates steam afterwards.

Following the heat transfer step is the electrical process. An operator is put overground in order to transfer heat to electricity. Inside the operator box is the turbine, activated by the movement of the steam to form direct currents flow. After being moved in a circle movement,the steam is transferred to the generator to produce electricity. Finally, the electricity is moved to an energy power which provides electricity to each household.

To summarize, the geothermal power plant is used to create energy in two continuous steps: transferring heat to water and making electricity by applying steam turbine technology.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
.... After being moved in a circle movement,the steam is transferred to the generator t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4303030303 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97454150305 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6316814923 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135169307052 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547835622439 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596158143979 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103924060213 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535398050591 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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