The modern mankind is facing up with a massive growth in the total global population. This current essay discusses some of the perceived causes of the rises, as well as debate to whether the overgrowth in population should be considered as a serious problem, when compared to other threats of our existence.
To begin with, there are several factors that lead to overpopulation issue and one of them is the unstable status of birth plan. To be more specific, this happens mostly in Asia countries, in which having a male offspring is always a first prioritize. In fact, an Asian man is allowed to marriage more than one wife, in order to achieve the main goal. Despite numerous countries, especially China, have passed out the “one child law”, this problem has not been clearly solved yet, in recent years.
Another measure for teeming population is technological outbreak. Since the Industrial Revolution, manufacturing business has been shifted from handmade crafting to auto-machines. Hence, mass production is available and it plays a key role in increasing human’s life expectancy by nonstop providing foods and medical treatments.
However, a rapid rise in population is not really one of the biggest threats to humility, when compared to climate change, due to its effects. While overpopulation impacts on social system, climate change even damages to other aspect – ecosystems. From an environmental perspective, climate change creates more extreme weather conditions, thus hampering the agricultural industry. In addition, it leads to the rise of sea level, which forces people to migrate.
In short, the recent growth of world population happens due to several factors mentioned above. Nevertheless, despite the negative effects it brings, what should be addressed first and foremost is climate change.
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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, thus, well, while, in addition, in fact, in short, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39721254355 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96102062923 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651567944251 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9332129962 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147775417278 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383789597436 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338829318188 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696294142793 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224413017108 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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