The provided bar chart delineates about the estimation sales of jeans for two organisations in upcoming year in the turkey and pie chart illustrates the share of market of two firms at the last of next year. It is crystal clear that in the starting of year , the sale of jeans of jack and Jones company is supposed to start around 500 thousand pairs which is higher near about 275 thousand pairs than mango company.when it comes to February to June , again the jack and Jones company will be following a rising trend consecutively in the sale of jeans , whereas the mango company will be least in the same time period for selling the pairs of jeans. However, in the month of July and August , the mango company is likely to increase the sales of jeans than jack and Jones company, while in the next two months September and October , the jeans will be sold almost similar by both the companies. Eventually, the jack and Jones company is speculated to the sale of jeans from November to December as compare to mango company , there will be 900 pair of jeans in the month of December. Regarding the pie chart, the other firms are supposed to share their 20% in the market,whereas the mango and jack jones company will be highest in the market share. Overall, the jack and Jones company will have a almost highest sales of jeans as well as share of market in the next year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of two firms at the last of next year. It is crystal clear that in the starting...
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Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ystal clear that in the starting of year , the sale of jeans of jack and Jones com...
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Line 1, column 538, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ompany.when it comes to February to June , again the jack and Jones company will b...
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Line 1, column 606, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...company will be following a rising trend consecutively in the sale of jeans , whe...
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Line 1, column 642, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rend consecutively in the sale of jeans , whereas the mango company will be least...
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Line 1, column 781, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...However, in the month of July and August , the mango company is likely to increase...
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Line 1, column 922, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he next two months September and October , the jeans will be sold almost similar b...
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Line 1, column 1113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to December as compare to mango company , there will be 900 pair of jeans in the ...
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Line 1, column 1134, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'pair' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'pairs'.
Suggestion: pairs
...re to mango company , there will be 900 pair of jeans in the month of December. ...
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Line 1, column 1174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pair of jeans in the month of December. Regarding the pie chart, the other firms...
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Line 1, column 1273, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , whereas
...upposed to share their 20% in the market,whereas the mango and jack jones company will b...
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Line 1, column 1352, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ny will be highest in the market share. Overall, the jack and Jones company will...
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Line 1, column 1485, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l, the jack and Jones company will have a almost highest sales of jeans as well a...
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Line 1, column 1487, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'almost the highest'.
Suggestion: almost the highest
... the jack and Jones company will have a almost highest sales of jeans as well as share of mark...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, so, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50403225806 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38006698003 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443548387097 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.879649213 43.030603864 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.166666667 112.824112599 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.3333333333 22.9334400587 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412782491507 0.215688989381 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.258692446332 0.103423049105 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143903113744 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.412782491507 0.15604864568 265% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.2329268293 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.71 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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