The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australia men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the frequency of exercise proportion in various age groups of both gender in Australia by 2010.
It can be clearly seen that except the youngest group, the proportion of female, who did adequate exercises, was also larger than male. Overall, from 35 to 44, the exercise percentages of male and female were almost the same after 65 years old.
Between 15 and 24 years old, it was the only trend that 52.8% of male motivated in regular exercise, which was higher than female at 47.7%. Then, the exercise interest of male at 25 to 34 was declined to 42.2%, as well as an increase showed on female at 48.9% slightly. Also, there was the lowest percentage of 35 to 44 in male at 39.5%, whereas 52.5% was indicated on female.
Turned to the ages between 45 to 54, 53.3% was the highest percentage over the charts, recorded on women, as well as a soft raising was obtained from male at 43.1%. Moreover, 45.1% of men from 55 to 64, tend to have an exercise activity regularly while 53% of women also believed of it. Finally, for the elder people who were over 65 years old, there was a balanced proportion at 46.7% and 47.1% for male and female, separately.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54460093897 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41011117019 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596244131455 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.0032676598 43.030603864 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.555555556 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121405509375 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610502714022 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548641367564 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980810145824 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607012878048 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.